Magazine initial feedback

These are the sheets my teacher wrote out for me telling me what is good about my magazine, and what I can add/improve. They have been very helpful so far.

Contents Page Update

This is my contents page now. I know I said the previous post would be the last but you never know with these things. Since last time the pictures have been made way bigger and the text has changed colour from red to black. I think this makes the magazine look slightly more serious and grown up, as it was starting to look more like a kids magazine.